The Visitor


Tommy lay motionless in his bed, but remained wide awake. What a boring day, he thought. Nothing but driving around with mom in the Mercedes, shopping for new clothes for my return back to my senior year at Finister Academy, the most boring private school in upstate New York. His vacation time had been even less eventful, however, but the realization that his new roommate there was probably not going to want to jerk off with him like Scott did made him feel even worse about the whole deal. Not that he really felt like finding someone new. It wasn't the jerking off, it was Scott... the friendly, fair, handsome, intelligent boy that fate had so kindly brought into his life. Tommy would do anything to take Scott in his arms and ravish him, anything at all. Masturbating together was indeed a dream come true for him, but every time it happened it left Tommy feeling even more empty afterwards.

Tommy's thoughts became enveloped by Scott, and as he lay back in the king- plus sized satin-covered bed, his large cock started to swell up rapidly. In his mind, a memory of Scott flashed in his eyes... stepping out of the shower room, his firm, muscular body glistening and dripping, and his handsome face smiling at him. His long, slender cock was at full attention, flushed with blood and almost shining with cleanliness. He approached the brief-claden Tommy and asked him the simple question, "wanna jerk off?" without a note of seriousness. Tommy heard himself laugh in the memory and saw his hands pulling the briefs down... then the two of them on Tommy's bed, stroking their maleness with the fervor of young, healthy, wanton men... and they did, though the memory was fuzzy. But it never went further... though he did watch Tommy with a curiosity that drove Tommy wild, in reality Scott never reached over to stroke Tommy, or leaned over to kiss him, or rub his hands over Tommy's young body. In fantasy, though, Scott was always willing to give this to Tommy... the gift of pure intimate physical love. Not the casual jizzlobbing that fate so cruelly limited them to. Though, for Tommy it was good enough to last him until the next time. Oh, to think of the many times he had tried to glean the courage to join Scott in his bed across from his in that room they had shared, to hold him and feel his warm masculine body pressed against his, but he never dared. Jacking off was one thing, but romance was completely different. Who knew what Scott would think? He would probably freak out and call Tommy a faggot and never want to see him again. He might as well just shoot Tommy between the eyes.

Now was not a time for reality, however, as Tommy lost himself in the eternal fantasy. He imagined himself naked on the bed with Scott, the both of them staring into each others' eyes, and then saw himself wrap his arms around Scott, who in turn embraced him and kissed him deeply and passionately, their hard cocks grinding together, both of them mad with lust.

Tommy broke off the fantasy for a moment. He opened his eyes and stared down across his body, which glowed blue in the moonlight pouring in through the window opposite him. He lightly brushed a finger across his well-built chest and tickled a large, fat nipple softly. His briefs were tenting to the point where they seemed about to rip. He pulled them down enough to let his large member fly free, which snapped rigidly up at him, the head already dripping pre-cum into his navel.

He couldn't help but get even more excited from seeing himself like this. He knew he was good-looking, and was very proud of this... but it was painful not to share this gift with someone. Someone like Scott...

Finally he had excited himself to the point of no return. He rid himself of the briefs by throwing them across the large, richly decorated room. Thoughts of Scott always affected him this way; he wasn't totally sure if it was love, but he desperately missed his dear friend more with every passing day. Sure, they wrote to each other, but it wasn't the same... At least I'll get to see him again this fall, and who knows what might happen then, he thought. Maybe we'll even be in the same room together.

He gently wrapped his hand around the base of his cock, and kicking off the remaining sheets, he worked his shaft slowly in the moonlight, with light, lazy strokes. He closed his eyes as visions of Scott danced in his lids, and with it the feeling of Scott's hand on his dick seemed almost real. Reliving his eternal fantasy and losing himself in the pleasure of pumping his throbbing cock, he drifted off into a world of pre-orgasmic rapture...

And in his trance, he failed to notice the silouhette at his window.

The figure wasn't noticing him either, though, as it worked on the alarm- monitored latch of the window. Using a magnetic strip and some electrical tape, the mechanism was effectively disarmed. A simple job for one as experienced in this game as he. He allowed himself a silent chuckle and slowly and noiselessly slid the window open just enough to let his slender body slip though the opening.

This is the one, he thought to himself. This is the big one... I could retire off this heist. God knows these fools have enough stashed in this place to let me live like a king.

Hell, what am I saying? I owe this much to these rich bastards, and I won't stop until they've all felt my pinch.

Dressed in black jeans, black shoes, a black sweater, and a black mask, he knew he'd come in undetected, and he was positive he'd leave as such. They wouldn't even know he was there until it was far too late. He still couldn't believe he had dressed in that ridiculous reporter's outfit. They really bought that bullshit about me doing an article on their house for Modern Home magazine, he thought. It got me in, though, so who am I to complain? These people are so stupid, they're almost BEGGING to be ripped off.

Okay, let's see, what should I do first, he continued in his mind, lost in the feeling of triumph. Take a trip to Mazatlan? Buy a Porsche and tour Europe? Or maybe find myself a hot young stud and settle down--

And then everything in his mind crashed against what he was now seeing. His brain was flooded with the image in front of him. Here was a boy, a perfectly gorgeous boy, not much younger than himself, sprawled out nude on his bed, masturbating slowly. His eyes were shut and his breathing was heavy, and the burglar was frozen in his tracks.

He almost lost it. This room was supposed to be vacant, his mind screamed as he came to his senses. They weren't supposed to have a son. There wasn't a son when I checked the place out... but there is now... and he will see me and all my intricate plans will have gone up in smoke with the existence of this one lousy boy... this one beautiful boy... totally naked and stroking a real piece of work... oh God, he thought. I have to get out of here before I cum in my pants.

Still perfectly silent, he looked back at the window he had just come through. If only I could make it back out through there without making a noise, I'll be okay... and then I'll leave and try again much later. Or maybe I'll give up on this place. That would be best... I can't ever come back here. This one will have to be the one that got away...

His usual confidence had completely left him, the confidence that kept him sure-footed and silent. Getting back out would be near impossible in his condition. Plus, he really didn't want to leave. His cock was now pressing uncomfortably against his black jeans, and his breathing was quickening, making it harder to conceal. I have to get out of here, he thought to himself, and quickly. He turned back around to look at the boy in front of him and found himself paralysed by the sight of this handsome boy, still stroking his wonderful cock and mumbling under his heavy breathing.

I have to have this kid, he suddenly realized. I can't leave here. I think I will die if I don't take this one chance. But how could I possibly do it? This is crazy! I can't believe this is happening to me!

He stared down at the floor, trying to collect his composure...

And as Tommy opened his eyes to watch his own throbbing cock, the scream that followed the realization that someone was here caught in his throat, making it only a strangulated gurgle. He sat bolt upright and covered himself up quickly with the sheets, not daring to scream again.

Oh shit, the man thought to himself. He scrambled to the window, but caught his foot on a table leg and went sprawling down on the fine carpet. As he tried to get up, Tommy leaped out of the bed, grabbed a revolver from the bedside table, and jumped on the man on the floor. Now shaking madly with fright, he held the man in his face-down position with the gun pointed in his jaw and demanded in a raspy, shaky whisper, "who the fuck are you??"

The man returned in a similar shaky whisper, "I'm unarmed! I swear to god I'm not going to hurt you!! Please don't shoot!!"

"What do you want here??" Tommy demanded, a little less shakily.

"I'm just a thief, I'm not going to hurt anyone!" he replied, shaking visibly. "I swear to god I'm unarmed and I won't hurt you!"

Tommy held him there for a moment, and for reasons he couldn't quite understand, he found himself believing this man. He quickly searched him and upon finding no weapons of any kind, he let him up, still poking the gun into his skull.

"Give me one good reason why I shouldn't blow your fucking head off," Tommy threatened raspily.

"I'll mess up your carpet really bad," the man nervously replied.

Tommy paused a moment. Mom would probably be more upset about that than anything, he thought. "Promise you won't try anything, cuz I will blow your brains out," Tommy said with a lot more confidence than he felt. He knew he couldn't hold the man here forever, and he didn't want to be naked when he turned this guy in.

"I swear to god, I couldn't hurt you--" he started and decided against finishing that thought. The kid is probably totally girl-crazy and I don't want to add sexual harassment to my upcoming police file.

Tommy gave him an odd look, but then reluctantly let go and jumped back quickly. The man didn't make any sudden moves, though; he just stood there and stared at him. "Take off your hood," Tommy demanded, waving the gun threateningly. To his surprise, the man obliged, revealing a face that made Tommy's heart jump. His face was boyish, though finely chiseled and smooth as his satin sheets. His large eyes were ice blue, and his lips were full and inviting. He had shaggy straight blonde hair, which was slightly mussed from the hood, and it hung down sexily across part of his face.

Tommy was stunned. I was expecting Denis Leary, he thought, and instead I get Mr. Universe.

Tommy's cock, which had gone semi-limp in the skirmish, was returning to its full height, and with nothing on, it was quite obvious in the moonlight. He made no attempts to conceal it, though. He suddenly found himself incomprehensibly excited.

"I told you I wouldn't hurt you," the man said. "Please, if you let me go, I won't ever come back again. I promise!" He was visibly shaken. Tommy stared at the man, his dick now raging, and he was certain the man could see it.

The man did see it, in fact, and it had his own cock near the exploding point. Fortunately, he thought to himself, with my back to the moonlight, he won't notice... but wait, he's just as excited as I am... maybe... maybe he wants it as much as I do?

Tommy continued to stare silently at the man, studying him. His frame was very nice too; even through the sweater it was obvious he was very muscular and trim. His lust was driving him wild, and the combination of cutting short his earlier jackoff and the presence of this hot babe was too much for him to resist going ahead.

He's my prisoner now anyway, Tommy thought, I can do what I want, can't I! He grinned nervously at the thought, his dick on the verge of exploding.

"Take off your shirt," Tommy ordered, to the surprise of the burglar. The man did so with little hesitation, though, much to Tommy's delight. Silouhetted in the moonlight, Tommy could make out every tight muscle on his shoulders and sides. His pectorals were very well developed, and his large nipples caught the edge of the incoming light beautifully. Tommy was beside himself with lust. He slowly lowered the gun, and then finally placed it on the bedside table.

"You're absolutely beautiful," the man ventured. When Tommy didn't say anything, he continued by saying, "when I saw you on the bed masturbating, I lost all will to do this... I couldn't go on. And yet I couldn't leave. You held me here even before you pinned me. I couldn't leave even if I wanted to."

Silence. Tommy just stared with a mix of caution and wanton need.

The man cautiously approached Tommy. He stopped a foot away, and reached out with his hand. After a short pause, Tommy hesitantly took it, and the man then put his cheek against Tommy's hand.

Tommy brought the man's face up to eye level and looked into his clear blue eyes. They were the same height, and they could gaze clear into each other's soul. The smooth young face smiled back at Tommy, its lips wrapped in an innocent, fresh beaming grin. Tommy ran a hand down the man's baby-smooth chest, feeling the split between the pectorals, and caressing the large, chubby brown nipples and eliciting groans of approval from deep within the man's full chest. Continuing with the other hand, he lightly brushed against the jeans that were straining against the man's ample meat.

The man shuddered and started to breathe heavily as he closed his eyes. Tommy then felt he could resist no more. He undid the man's pants and taking the cue, the man removed them and stood facing Tommy as naked and vulnerable as the day he was born. After studying his body with fascinated intensity, Tommy then wrapped his arms around the man's waist, and he pulled him towards him and kissed him. The man returned the kiss deeply and took Tommy into a strong embrace. The two fell back on the bed and started humping each other's dicks slowly and heavily. They continued to kiss each other deeply as they ground their meat together, both of them working up a fine sweat which glistened in the moonlight.

Passionately they rolled around on the silky smooth bedsheets, still locked in a tight embrace and still kissing and grinding madly. They rolled onto the floor, and as they continued to fuck each other's cock wildly, the man groaned and exploded his juice all over the both of them, and then their embrace was broken as Tommy started licking the cum up and then sucking the remaining cream out of the man's now ultra-sensitive and still hard dick.

The man then shifted position and swallowed Tommy's cock, sucking it for all he was worth. Tommy gasped for air, groaned, and jerked his body with orgasmic fury, slowly forgetting the man was a stranger. After a while, it was instead Scott who was expertly working his member, Scott who was lying here with him sharing the most private and passionate moment of their lives.

Scott, he thought, I do love you... I want you now and forever... please... I never want to be alone again...

Tommy began to spasm. Quickly, he let loose a tidal wave of cum into the man's eager throat, and when he had spent his all and the man had drunk him dry, they lay together in the mess of sheets on the floor, in each other's arms, cheek to cheek. The musky smell of the handsome intruder was not unlike Scott's, or so it seemed at the moment: the wonderful pungent scent that had lingered in the air after the two had jerked off together in their dorm room... it was a smell Tommy never would forget.

Tommy held the man fast, trying not to weep. Scott, he thought, I love you so much... please don't leave me...

Several silent, seemingly eternal minutes went by before the man said what both knew was inevitable. "I have to go," he stated, his voice blank.

Tommy nodded solemnly, and reluctantly released him. The man stood up and started dressing silently. Tommy watched him from the floor, eyes heavy with an already overwhelming loneliness. The man finished dressing, and after a fond look back, he silently slipped out the window. As quickly as he'd arrived, the man was just as quickly gone from his life, leaving Tommy with only a cherished memory and the slight taste of salt on his lips.

As he gathered his composure and his bedsheets which were both scattered all around him, he felt on the verge of crying. His arms ached for just one more minute in the handsome burglar's embrace. He at least was real... and Scott was so far away.

Once his bed was somewhat reassembled, he went and stood at the window, but there wasn't a sign of the stranger. Tommy noticed the magnetic strip that had defeated the alarm system, yet left it where it was. This is my welcome mat, he thought to himself, in case he ever returns... in case his memory is all that I have left...

Tommy knew he wouldn't return, though. And he wasn't sure if he could bear it. Being with him had made Tommy realize that Scott was his true love, and nothing could take its place. Lying back in his bed with the soft satin sheets gathered around him, Tommy's mind slowly drifted back to Scott... his smooth young face smiled back at Tommy, its lips wrapped in an innocent, fresh beaming grin... and as the joy and tears washed over him, they pulled him under into slumber.


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